MP 2.2 I like my introduction and how I plan out what I’m going to talk about in it, but if you have advise on improving it I’d love to hear it. The first body paragraph is a general summary of what I’ll put in the final draft, and I’ll be adding quotes and details […]
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MP 2.2 and Week 7 Blog 4 comments
mp 2.1 rough draft 2 comments
Rough Draft I’d like the most review on how I can expand my counter-argument. I think I have a good grasp of why both governments exist, and I hope I did a decent job of laying that out here. I tried to give Hobbes a thorough, clear presentation of his argument for why his […]
MP 2-1 Rough Draft 3 comments
MP 2-1 Rough Draft This is my rough draft to the answer of second prompt: Why do government exist? This is the basic structure of my essay and I will be adding more “meat” to it once I receive feedback from my group at conference to tell if I am headed in the right […]
Week 7 blog 2 comments
mp2.1 Hey guys, I accidently forgot my pc at my fraternity and now I am in Canada so I will upload my rough draft on Sunday. One part of my essay that needs review is my intro paragraph. Its hard for me to give background info and hard to introduce the ideas of Locke […]
Lyman MP2 3 comments
LYMANMP2 I chose the first prompt, about who should lead, how they should lead, and why they should lead. I definitely need some assistance with the why, as I am not sure I am being specific enough about that particular section. I also am completely struggling with a suitable conclusion. Everything I tried […]
Rough Draft MP 2 3 comments
The areas of my paper that I’m struggling in are creating my own arguments while comparing and contrasting Locke and Hobbes. I don’t believe that there is much room for me to expand on my own ideas as to why government exists, because I feel that I have to work within the realm of these […]
2.2 Rough Draft 3 comments
2.2_NicoleHobble In my particular case, I would like to have feedback on my argument. I wasn’t completely sure if I had a clear argument or counterargument. I know that I have my ideas straight and where i’m going with this, I just want to make sure that it is on the right track. I’m not […]
MP 2 Rough/Conference Memo 3 comments
Mp 2 Rough What I really am hoping to hear back on is if my essay is following all of the logical steps in order for my conclusion to be reached. First off, I need to know if the claim I am making is substantial enough at all – I feel like I am walking […]
MP 2 roughdraft 3 comments
Zach Taylor Paige Morgan English 298B MP 2 Rough Draft Two political theorists, John Locke and Thomas Hobbes offer reasoning and answers as to why governments exist. Both first derive their justification from analyzing human nature. Stemming from their interpretation of our nature they develop different arguments as to how governments form, what their […]
Rough Draft & Conference 3 comments
Rob Oser_MP 2.2_Rough Draft For my paper I have questions about a few things. First of all, I am not used to writing with sign posts, as seen in the introductory paragraph. Do these work, spelling out what the paper will be about? If they don’t how do you suggest I change it so I […]