In my particular case, I would like to have feedback on my argument. I wasn’t completely sure if I had a clear argument or counterargument. I know that I have my ideas straight and where i’m going with this, I just want to make sure that it is on the right track. I’m not really sure what else I need to say. This is a rough draft for me and I’m hoping that your feedback will benefit the way I reconstruct it for my final draft. Anything you say will be helpful, and I appreciate it. But, for the most part, I’m not too sure how I feel about this draft. I know I have a lot of work to do, but that’s why it’s a first draft.
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