For my paper I have questions about a few things. First of all, I am not used to writing with sign posts, as seen in the introductory paragraph. Do these work, spelling out what the paper will be about? If they don’t how do you suggest I change it so I don’t use the first person in the paper? Another thing to look out for is to see if the arguments made in the body paragraphs truly relate back to the topic of why governments exist. It is easy when writing to go off on tangents and still think that your writing is relative to the topic. In my last body paragraph I have a counterargument for Hobbes’s view of government, but not Locke’s. Are there any obvious ideas to counter Locke that I am blanking on that I should include?
That’s what to look for in my paper. Looking forward to the conference.
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