So far I feel like my major paper is coming together pretty well,
but it might be different for others who read it. I really need feedbacks to
see if my paper is clear and understandable. I also feel like my counter
argument is not strong enough. I think most of my ideas are pretty well s
tructured. I kind of just threw the end of my paper together because I am
having a difficult time in organzing my paper. My organization is definitely
lacking. I have a pretty good idea of Locke and Hobbes but still have a difficult
trying to put them together. I changed a few things from my 2.1 paper after
listening to Paige’s comments. Hopefully this paper will turn out better than
my last.
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