So, I’d like to start off by saying I will gladly take ANY criticism in any part of this draft. I’m not feeling very confident in this paper, for whatever reason I’ve been having a hard time connecting with the topic, so any help you could offer would be appreciated. However, the areas I’m most concerned about are my counter-argument and my 1st body paragraph. I don’t really feel like I address the counter-argument effectively yet, and my counter-argument only deals with one portion of my essay, what governments should look like, and I’m not convinced that’s comprehensive enough. Also, in my 1st body paragraph, I feel like I drift off track a few times. If there’s anything you think I should cut out please let me know. Any and all help is greatly appreciated, thanks!
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