Hey guys, here’s my rough draft.
A few things to look for in the paper are the conversation about Locke and how understanding his theory was similar to Hobbes. I don’t know if I made a clear connection between the two regarding threshold concepts and transformative ideas. Also I was a little confused on how to integrate the blog posts, so if you have any ideas to improve that paragraph they would be helpful. The last thing I would appreciate input on is if there is anything important I could add to the paper, specifically in describing the threshold concept.
I look forward to reading all of yours and thanks for all the comments and help this quarter.
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