Major Paper 2 Rough Draft – Chelsea
August 15th, 2011
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Hey guys, sorry that I’m posting this so late! I hope that you’ll be able to take a look at it before our conference tomorrow. It is a very very rough draft so I hope that you can give me some useful feedback! Thanks!
Major Paper 2 Rough Draft Docx
Major Paper 2 Doc
I really liked how you analyzed the events of the story in some ways I’d never think of and we never even talked about in class! So is your main point that Julius’s goal is to ‘make history’-get revenge on Debra and acquire recognition? I definitely see how you mean for your points to tie into that, but I thought you could have explained and connected them more. Otherwise, it was a very clear and concise essay! Are you going to add in specific lines from the novel?
Yes that’s what I was aiming for. I definitely need to add lines from the story and explain how a couple more events tie in to my main point.
I like how you included Julius’ involvement with rebuilding the Haunted Mansion as another reason for his desire to keep on going, despite his failing body. Overall though it seemed pretty brief and general, but it is a pretty good start