Draft for major paper 1 – Vivian
July 22nd, 2011
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Stating your argument at the beginning made this very clear to read. But, of course we produce more collectively than individually. I like the other direction your paper took- how new inventions change production lines & the value of labor.
Your paper raises some good questions about how to determine the value of work, especially as more and more tasks are automated or simply spread out among many people. Your paper did seem a little disjointed with so many short paragraphs though, so maybe combine or extend a few to make everything flow a bit better