ENGL 200 D: Reading Literature: Literature in the Marketplace

You might want to state your argument sooner.
Besides that, I agree with what you’re saying. Duck’s poem was pretty annoying and deserves to be challenged.

I see how you’re using your 3 texts pretty clearly. But you specifically refer to the third story in one of your paragraphs, and that makes me think where the other two were in your essay, or if you even used them at all?
Also, I find it interesting that you focused on the difference between a man’s labour and a woman’s labour and how each obtain their value. I expected you to make your main point to be about how men work harder, more physically demanding tasks while women work longer, never-ending tasks and thus, how can you say which one is more important? And that they are both important to the others’ survival? However, your point works too and I completely agree with you. I thought maybe you could’ve ended stronger.