Paper 1 draft (Becca)
July 22nd, 2011
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I thought the way you explained and connected the two texts was really great! You make really good use of them in your paper. However, it does feel a bit repetitive and redundant in places, especially towards the end.
I can’t really think of anything to improve on, your paper is really well polished! I do agree it does get a tad repetitive towards the end, but I can’t think of any other places to improve really.