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https://www.paigemorgan.net/teaching/engl200d/?p=718 University of Washington, Summer 2011 Wed, 17 Aug 2011 03:02:09 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.1.4 https://www.paigemorgan.net/teaching/engl200d/?p=718#comment-283 Wed, 17 Aug 2011 03:02:09 +0000 http://www.paigemorgan.net/teaching/engl200d/?p=718#comment-283 This looks like a fantatstic brainstorm of ideas that you want to touch on in your paper but for the final draft I would suggest finding a way to let the ideas flow a little more clearly from topic to topic. In your introduction for example, you might want to bring in Adam Smith and tie in how the two relate to eachother. That way Smith’s appearance in paragraph five won’t be such a surprise.

]]> https://www.paigemorgan.net/teaching/engl200d/?p=718#comment-271 Tue, 16 Aug 2011 20:03:56 +0000 http://www.paigemorgan.net/teaching/engl200d/?p=718#comment-271 The part that I’m a little confused about is–what is your answer to the question? Does Goldfinger exist because he shows the importance of gold (P1), because he is obsessed with wealth (P2) or because he’s rich and shows that it’s good, which matches with Smith (P3)?
You’ve captured major important parts of Goldfinger’s character, but it would be helpful if you can clarify your argument and use what you have to support a thesis.

]]> https://www.paigemorgan.net/teaching/engl200d/?p=718#comment-266 Tue, 16 Aug 2011 06:31:54 +0000 http://www.paigemorgan.net/teaching/engl200d/?p=718#comment-266 I think this is a good start to the paper. You do a good job describing Goldfinger, but I think that right now there is only a summary of the character. I also think that you could expand much more on the economic system that is in place in this novel, something you touch on in the 4th paragraph. This would be a great opportunity to analyze Goldfinger deeper as you explain his role.

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